Rewrite the story above correctly. Ensuring there are capital letters, full stops, correct spelling, and question marks are in the correct place.
My correct version of: A Windy Walk
It was cold and windy as the twins walked to school. Julie had forgotten to put on her beanie before she and her brother left home. ¨Why are your ears red Julie?” asked her brother Ben. Julie replied ¨Because theyŕe super cold Ben!¨. Then she shivered as the wind howled, blowing leaves all around them.
Rewrite the story above correctly. Ensuring there are capital letters, full stops, correct spelling, and question marks are in the correct place.
My correct version of: Going to the Circus
Today we are going to the circus. I am so excited to see the tightrope walkers and trapeze artists! I bet it would be scary being up so high. My brother just wants to see the elephants. They're his favourite animals. Have you ever been to the circus? What would you most like to see?
Rewrite the story above correctly. Ensuring there are capital letters, full stops, correct spelling, and question marks are in the correct place.
My correct version of: Beach Day
Sam packed his towel, hat, a bucket and spade into a yellow backpack. He is already wearing his bathers, they are blue with little red crabs all over them. Mum is helping to rub the sunscreen on Sam’s back. Sunscreen is very important because today is beach day. Sam can hardly wait to play in the sand and go swimming. Do you like going to the beach ?
I learned how to proofread and edit a document. I did it with the three short pasaages above.
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