Friday, September 18, 2020

Cinderella Retelling By Lyrissa

 Once upon a time there was a young girl and her parents that lived happily. one day her mother was very sick and died a few days later. A few years later her father had married another woman named Lady Treiman but she treated Ella like a maid. She was very cruel and selfish like her daughters. Anastasia and Drizilla would pick their noses secretly and were alo cruel and selfish. Ella's stepsisters mocked her and said “You always look like you're covered in ash”. They started to call Ella, Cinderella. One morning they were sent an invitation from the King and the Prince. They're going to be having a ball for the Prince and so the Prince could find a wife.

Cinderella was very sad that she couldn’t go to the ball, because she had asked her step

mother if she could go. The StepMother said “No”. because she had to clean the kitchen

and the rooms. Cinderella knew she wouldn’t have enough time to finish cleaning to go to

the ball and said.¨It will take a week”. The mice and the birds then started to help her

because they felt sorry for Cinderella. So when they were done Cinderella asked again and

said “I'm finished”. Her Stepmother said ¨Nobody wouldn’t want to look at you¨. 

¨You are so dirty and smelly¨. She ran to  the garden and started crying.


The Fairy Godmother waved her magic wand when Cinderella was outside. The Fairy

Godmother had appeared and said 

“You are going to the ball”. 

Cinderella said “What am I going to wear?”. so the Fairy Godmother waved her magic

wand and a pretty blue dress appeared on Cinderella with her glass slippers. A pumpkin

carriage appeared. The rats were the coach men. The Fairy Godmother said ¨Be sure to

leave the ball before 12AM or the spell will not work any more. So she went to the ball

and the Prince saw Cinderella. He couldn't take his eyes off her. The Prince asked

Cinderella for a dance. They had danced but forgot about the time. She ran to her carriage

and the Prince was following her. Cinderella was already gone. The Prince saw one of

Cinderella's glass slippers. Cinderella had made it home and was in her room.     


The Prince and Cinderella lived happily ever after. The Prince “said to go to all the girls in

this village and  look for who can fit the shoe. It” came to Cinderella's house but first her

sisters had to try it. Anastasia and Drizella both tried it but their foot could not fit the shoe.

The Prince had asked if there were any other women here and Lady Treman said “We only

have a kitchen maid and that's it”. So the prince went to her to try the slipper on her.

She slowly put the glass slipper on her foot and it fitted. The Prince married Cinderella.





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